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OPINION ESSAY-Ferran Moral

All over the world there is and has been, for as long as we can remember, violence between nations, organitzacions and individual peoples. This has caused that the violence among the teenagers increase, and nowadays has had a big impact in the society. The seriousness of the matter is that this violence usually start from observing it at their families , neighborhoods, communities or just what they watch on television, on the internet… To conclude I think that the violence between the teens will not ever ending. And one important thing that we have to remember is that not just one single factor can be linked to youth violence and the society also has some responsibility to it. For example, if the society limited games and videos that have many violent scenes and parents took care of their kids much more than at the present the violence would decrease.

OPINION ESSAY- ADRIA GONZALEZ

Nowadays, violence in society, especially among teenagers, increases when more violence is shown on television. However, the question we need to answer is what extent do I agree or disagree. Many people consider that when violence is shown on television, violence increases in society. For example, according to many people, the teenagers, who, seeing a lot of violence on television then take it as an example and they also use violence. Furthermore, in my opinion it has nothing to do with what people see on television if not the education they receive. If a person is given a good education, no matter how much violence he sees on television, it will not be violent. To sum up, I believe that no matter what people watch on television it all depends on the education they receive.

OPINION ESSAY-MICHELLE PRIETO

Nowadays , most teenagers are increasing their violence more and more because of television programs,  where  they watch at home, on TV or video games. I think that  violent series and movies have influenced the behavior of many teenagers.  If young children had not seen these violent programs, in the future they could have had a better behavior.  Because what children watch on TV can influence their behavior. It is said that according to the media, 80% of children,  who  are under 12 years old, buy violent games. For example, many of these games,  which  put a minimum age to play, are recommended that small children do not play because they are very violent.  If children paid attention to this alert type, they would have a better future without so much violence. To conclude , I believe that the parents of younger children should be more concerned with the types of programs they watch and the video games they play.

OPINION ESSAY- CARLA EMETERIO

OPINION ESSAY- CARLA EMETERIO I think that watch violence in tv can influence to teenagers in a specific way. If you are a person that you let influence for other character is possible that you will be more violent but if you are more sure of yourself and you think before do an action you won’t be violent, For other hand I think that if you see an idol in tv who you admire it can be that you do the same   thing and you normalize the situation In my opinion watching violence on tv it is not a violence increasing factor because we see it in a lot of situations like in the street and we don’t imitate this actions. But in ones which the violence is inside and have mental issues is more probably that he violence show on tv could affect them by seeing it as a normal thin based on this mental structure, this could be a problem, is because of that, the news must be careful about how explicit the violence e they show is. In conclusion, watch a violence in tv is not an excuse fo...

OPINION ESSAY - ANDREU ROLDÁN

Nowadays violence is much common in TV shows or films that in the past. All the people that use to watch them are exposed to an excessive violence. For a lot of people there are no reasons to be shown on TV because they think that increases the agressivness on teenagers. But it's true that the teenagers who watch violence is more likely to be violent? According to some experts, it's true that they make more violent teenagers but it's not the only reason that exists. Personally I agree that with it but also, is the teenager that decides to watch that shows or films, always there's another option but i f you watch programs that show violence you will be most likly to be agressive. Therefore I can conclude that the violence of TV is not the only reason that makes you more prone to be agressive but i f we watch violence it could be for our poor education and for know what we don’t have to do.

OPINION ESSAY - JAN TALAVERA

   Many people think that there is more and more violence every day among teenagers due to the violence which is shown in television. Firstly , I personally consider that if young people see that there are not penalties to real criminals, maybe they will act as them . For example , when youth watch a film in which appears a violent action, they can feel attracted for what are seeing and try to imitate it.Ç Moreover, there are some teenagers who spend many hours listening racist politics in television. Some of them can feel identified with that ideologies and then, act with hate and violence with people of other races. In conclusion , if there is control with the content that young people watch in television, their behaviour will not be affected . Television have to be compromised with the responsibility of their programmes, otherwise , they will show to the young people a bad attitude to other ideologies or ways of life.

OPINION ESSAY - CARLA EMETERIO

 I think that watch violence in tv can influence to teenagers in a specific way. If you are a person that you let influence for other character is possible that you will be more violent but if you are more sure of yourself and you think before do an action you won’t be violent, For other hand I think that if you see an idol in tv who you admire it can be that you do the same thing and you normalize the situation In my opinion watching violence on tv it is not a violence increasing factor because we see it in a lot of situations like in the street and we don’t imitate this actions. But in ones which the violence is inside and have mental issues is more probably that he violence show on tv could affect them by seeing it as a normal thin based on this mental structure, this could be a problem, is because of that, the news must be careful about how explicit the violence e they show is. In conclusion, watch a violence in tv is not an excuse for do it and can affect who is more ma...

OPINION ESSAY Marta González

Nowadays the violence is very present in our lives, this is because there are many cases and they are shown on TV. I think television and social networks, in many cases, influence teenagers to be violent but it depends on the person. There are teenagers that it doesn’t matter how much violence they see that they never would practice it, but on the other hand there are people that watching violence incites them. And obviously it also depends on the education that the teenager have received,  is an important factor. In conclusion, parents should educate their children for that from childhood they understand that violence is not good and they shouldn’t practice.

OPINION ESSAY - LAURA CASTRO

  VIOLENCE IN OUR SOCIETY Although the violence has always been in our society, maybe with the invention of the TV has increase. Teenagers or young people like me are easy to influence about what we watch in the TV because sometimes we take actors and actresses like a model or idol to follow their actions, so if whose character in the film or series is a bad people, this can be a possible simple reason about the growth of the violence. But for example if I watch a film which violence is showed, I don’t become violent. But its true that the parents should limit TV watching for their children to a few hours a week and only for children's and educational programs. Always keep them away from violent behaviors, especially in younger years. To sum up I think that it depends of the character of the person the violence in the TV would have more or less influence in them. CONDITIONALS CONNECTORS Relative clauses

OPINION ESSAY - DANI ROSELLO

Violence on TV In this essay I'm going to talk about violence in society, specially when it's shown on television. It is known that some TV channels show violence on their programs. But do they know if they influence people to be come more violent? And specially teenagers that are already violent. If they watched less TV, would they be less violent? Nowadays , violence in society is growing considerably, and according to many families, one of the main causes is television. Nevertheless , not everyone agrees, but let's focus on teenagers. Personally I believe that when you watch TV, same as when you 're hungry, you can choose between several options. You can choose between watching violent pr o grams or not. S o If you watch programs that show violence you are more prone to be violent. Sometimes it's just not the TV programs what makes teenagers turn violent, sometimes i t is caused by videogames, or the violence they see at school...

Opinion Essay - Berta Fuertes

Nowadays, special effects are frequently used to create all kinds of content in which we can find violence and as it is broadcast on television everyone can see it. Personally, I belive that the violence increment whith the television shows or films, speciallly on teenagers and kids because they get their fabourite scenes as a example for her personality which is not fomed yet. It is also not possible to ask a director , who has taken time to write a script, that eliminates all the scenes of violence to protect the children.But if this were possible,the films would be more boring. To sum up, I think that the only way to prevent the increase of violence is the parents' conscience, that is to say  , they have to keep an eye on the recommended age in each film.

OPINION ESSAY- GERARD M

OPINION ESSAY Violence in society: Nowadays, the violence in society increases by the televisions news such as the teenagers when they see more violence in television more increase their grade of violence which are linked to the problems there are in the society now. All the day we can see violence in television news, for example in the street or around the world however the society gets poor and scared. Maybe the society becomes more violent and aggressive for defending or protecting their selves. The television violence has negatives impacts to the society because the people see violence very regular and they finally take it costumed. Finally, people think that if you see aggressive acts in television, you will get violence. In my conclusion, I think people gets more vulnerable to the impact of television, if they see violence, for instance, they may grow disturbed about cases of violence occurring in society . That makes that people start to see for themselves and ...

OPINION ESSAY - AITOR DÍAZ

Does violence in society, especially in teenagers, increase when more violence is shown on television? Nowadays, almost everyone has a television at home and it’s not very strange to be opened at least about 2 hours a day. Probably it’s the most used electronic device at home. If I had the opportunity, I would watch it everyday . Television is a good way to learn interesting things, entertain yourself and to be in contact with what’s happening in the world, but what about the violence it shows?    First of all, I agree, in my opinion violence does increase in society when it’s shown on television. I think that teenagers are the most vulnerable group to its violence, due to the exaggerated amount of hours we spend in front of the TV. We have a lot of free time, which we waste watching stupid series or whatever it’s shown at the moment. Another fact that makes violence increase in us when it’s shown on television easier than in adults is how influential we are....

OPINION ESSAY- LAURA VILLALONGA

OPINION ESSAY- LAURA VILLAONGA Nowadays teenagers are easy to influence through what they see on television. I think people with just watching movies or series of violence don’t become violent. For example,   if I see a movie where there’s violence I won’t become violent. People become violent if they see too much violence on television . For example, if a person always looks at things related to violence, reality is distorted and may think that what is wrong is right. In conclusion, I believe that a person looking at violence one day won’t become violent. You have to watch a lot of violence on television to get to that point.

Opinion Essay Alex Font

Today, teenagers watch a lot of television daily, this can be a risk if there is violence on television. Nevertheless , on television there are also many programs about history, nature, in which you can learn a lot and who are seen by a few teenagers, but these programs are not seen by the most of teenagers. In my opinion, I think that TV makes us see violence as a method to fix things, and this is not good. I also believe that there are teenagers with problems who feel identified with television violence. A lot of people think that if there was no violence on television, there would not be so much violence in teenagers. Moreover , we would all live better. In my opinion, If parents do not let their children see the violence channels, everything would be better . Although it is difficult everything your children sees. 

Opinion Essay-Carlos Cervera

Nowadays, is shown more violence in TV than in the past, in films, series or even in the news. Many of the people who watch the TV every day are exposed to this aggressiveness. So, are the teenagers who watch this violence more likely to be violent?   People make decisions based on their personal experience, both empirical and rational, so it seems logical to say that the violence on TV creates violent people. However, all of the people that say that TV causes violence tend to ignore the important life experiences: A bad childhood with abusive parents or ones that don’t take much care about you, loneliness, poor social relationships, etc.   It’s also true that this experiences makes us more likely to be influenced by the TV and taking all we watch as an example to reproduce in real life. Therefore, the problem comes from a lack of identity that is counteracted with the influence of TV. It usually happens in USA on the tragic school killings. In conclusion, I think TV is not t...

Opinion essay David Galvezinho

VIOLENCE ON TV In this essay I would like to talk about the influence of the TV in the violent way in which can act in the lives of those who watch it. It is well known that, currently, there are many TV programs or series in which violent circumstances appear but can them really affect the mentality of those who watch them, highlighting the teenagers who are the ones that can be most influenced? If they watched less TV, would they be less violent? Personally, I think that watching violent circumstances on television can influence in a violent way in their lives, specially, in teenagers lives because many of them copy things that happen on TV, so, consciously or unconsciously, they imitate what they see on television. Furthermore, there are scientific studies that show that watching violent episodes on television increases violence in those who watch it. Therefore, if young people see less violence, they are less violent. Nevertheless, I think it is good that sometimes ...

Opinion essay- Edgar Tomas

Edgar Tomas De La Fuente Nowadays, the violence is more present in our society and also in our youth. Because of this we have many questions, for example, if watching TV a lot can make you more violent . Personally, I can agree with this question. Since young people and childrens when their schedule ends , they can continue watching programs that are not appropiatet for them, but if the parents whose mother or father watch that, it would be much better. On the other hand, I think that not all of the blame is on television, but easy use internet and the different violents games or that makes us extremely competitive can lead to violence for young people. All in all, I believe that much of the blame is of the new technologies, but really if they were not use technology, we would be less violent.

OPINION ESSAY- KILIAN CARRERA

Nowadays, violence in society is growing considerably, and according to many families,what is shown on television, is one of the main causes. Nevertheless , not everyone thinks the same, especially some teenagers, who actually disagree with this statement . In my opinion, as a teenager that I am, i think that what is shown on Tv could be a cause of violence in society, but for me, social inequalities and the differences in personal beliefs, which make people feel inferior and even excluded, are the main cause. Many studies have stated that if social inequalities were reduced, the number of violence would also be reduced   In addition , a lot of people would live better than they live nowadays. Moreover,  the violent scenes, which make teenagers more viole nt , can easily be avoided if parents forbid their children to watch it. But as parents don't act accordingly to this escenes, their children are influenced by them. All in all, violence in society is not always ...

OPINION ESSAY - Andrea Rodríguez

OPINION ESSAY Nowadays, the violence has increase a lot and some people above all teenagers has normalized these situations. Television, video games, TV programs, news and social networks where are very present in our lives and teach us things, but also they have a lot of influence on us. In my opinion, i believe that teenagers have become accustomed to see frenquently violence and fights either in person or through action movies or video games. Therefore i think that we can’t blame television since the only fault it belongs to those who comite violence. Our main mistake is to let us manipulate by television, why society has received a bad education. Furthermore, if we weren’t so influential there wouldn’t be so much violence. In conclusion, if they warned us since we were kids, that we be careful with the technology, we would make good use of it and there would be less violence. Everything depends on us.

Opinion essay Álvaro Navarro

Opinion essay Actually, the violence is so integrated in our society and we can feel it in many envoirments: sport, TV, Social Networks, videogames... and, according to the majority of families, violence is involved in their teenager’s life. They also think that the guilty of that problem is from television and social networks. In that case, people say “ If the social networks hadn’t exist, it wouldn’t be so much violence from teenagers ”. In my sincere opinion , If the owners of social network bann violence videos, they will reduce the influence on teenager’s life. However , I think that parents who their children have access to violence, shouldn’t allow them to see it. In conclusion , violence is in the atmosphere of all the teenagers whose mobile phones are connected to Internet and have Social Networks and also in all the families who have TV, radio… but I think that we should learn and not get influenced by violence.

Opinion essay Óscar Villanueva

Nowadays, more and more violence is seen in places where there is a lot of poverty, which makes the whole topic of violence expand, and above all, in the world of new technologies, which are sold too much, and have Social networks that you can see everything. However, the question we need to answer is violence in society, especially among teenagers, increases when more violence is shown on television? Personally, I think that TV has a great way to manipulate the public, you can see things that people really do not need to see, but it also makes you see reality, why society is like that, but children should not see, instead, they do it, why it is the education that parents give their children. For example, if parents really forbade what their children have to do, when they were older they would not be so aggressive. Furthermore, in my opinion, you can see more violence on the street or in many sports, than what television really shows. It is clear to me, wher...

OPINION EASSY-PAU RIUDOR GUINOVART

OPINION EASSY-VIOLENCE IN SOCIETY Now a day the violence is not just in the television but also in other places where teenagers use frequently as videogames or in the cinema. In my opinion the television and the videogames aren’t the enemies as the knife doesn’t have the guilty of the how we use it. The videogames which we use to play are some full of violence but if we now that is just a game and someone is remanding us that is not the real live they haven’t to be a problem. I think that the problem is if you can’t release that it’s just a game you have a problem. If your son has a bad education about violence, he would be a violence boy. That means that if you teach your sons and daughters in a peaceful way they will act in a peaceful way. In conclusion, I believe that if the parents don’t act in the education of his sons and daughters in a quiet way, they will be a problematic people.              ...

Opinion essay - Arnau Sánchez

Opinion essay - Arnau Sánchez Nowadays, many people accuse television that increase violence in teenagers. Evidently, the TV channels deny it and they say that a lot of programs help teenagers to increase their knowledge. I personally believe that in recent years, the programs that have the most audience encourage a negative attitude in young people, because the programs are about people who argue. On the other hand, if you watch programs like documentaries, you will pass the school more easy, because probably you study things related with the program. When you arrive to this things, you will not study a lot because you know it. Al in all, I think television is good for you if you watch the correctly programs. However, as I said before, the program with more audience do not help teenagers to reduce their violence.

Opinion Essay-Lorena Pires

Nowadays , most teenagers are increasing their violence more and more because of television programs, where they watch at home, on TV or video games. Personally , I think that violent series and movies have influenced the behavior of many teenagers. If young children had not seen these violent programs, in the future they could have had a better behavior. Because what children watch on TV can influence their behavior. Furthermore , according to the media, 80% of children, who are under 12 years old, buy violent games. For example , many of these games, which put a minimum age to play, are recommended that small children do not play because they are very violent. If children paid attention to this alert type, they would have a better future without so much violence. In conclusion , I believe that the parents of younger children should be more concerned with the types of programs they watch and the video games they play.

OPINION ESSAY- MAR SOLÉ

OPINION ESSAY- MAR SOLÉ Nowadays television makes us learn new things as well as it influences us specially when we are teenagers because we are very easily influenced. I think that it takes more than just television for someone to be violent. It’s related with that person’s traits. For example, I really love watching action movies where usually there is a lot of violence but that doesn’t make me more violent.     I don’t think that If you watch violence, you will be more violent. However, television really influences so it’s better to not let young people watch a lot of violence but that obviously doesn’t mean that they are violent if they watch violence. So , I think that television influences teenagers but it’s the parent’s job to be aware of what their kids watch on tv.

OPINION ESSAY CLAUDIA GARCÍA

Violence is the intentional use of physical force, threats against someone who has consequently or is very likely to result in trauma, psychological damage, developmental problems or death. Nowadays , violence is very used in teenagers because of all the TV program shows, which are watched by young people. From my point of view, I disagree with violence because it does not take to any place. I think that violence in young people is seen frequently because there are many programs that shows lot of violence.   In these programs, are shown lot of real scenes where some people are in trouble and the only possibility to resolve is using the violence. If teenagers did not watch TV programs shows, they would not use so much violence.   Furthermore , some of these teenagers live in a dangerous environment. Their family have lot of problems and usually they use the violence because they do not have any manner to sort out. In conclusion , violence does not help to anyone and ...

OPINION ESSAY JUDIT GARCÍA

Violence is the use of force to get something, or to dominate someone. Actually , violence is widely used in society and has influence on young people through television programme shows, which help to encourage it use. Firstly , I do not like violence and I totally disagree with people who use it. In my opinion , violence is not good in society because it does not go to anywhere and it causes bad consequences. All the wars, which had been made in this world , have caused lot of pain to lot of people who were innocent. These facts are suffered until now. If these wars had not happened, the world’s history would have been different. Besides that, violence in adolescents causes harmful actions, which became when a young person starts or ends. The young person can be the victim, the aggressor or the witness of this act of violence. If the referents’ teenagers had not taught them to solve their problems with violence, they would have been different. In conclusion, I wish that i...

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Anna Rosell                1rB Opinion Essay—Violence in society      Now a days in the television they put programs which are not very educational and tend to teach to teenagers more violence than good things. However what we need to think about is if teenagers or adults become more violent after watching this kind of programes. In my opinion I think that for sure they do make people more violent, because it teaches that hurting or misbehaving is fun, when at no point it is, it can even harm people who act violently to hurt people who they love. For example if you are used to watching these shows and you are used of getting angry you tend to get more angry and get more violent when you're in a bad mood, and these shows do not help you to be more relaxed. But in the other point of view it can make people open their eyes and make them see that doing bad things is not fun, and they would not doit because they ...