Opinion essay- Edgar Tomas


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Nowadays, the violence is more present in our society and also in our youth.Because of this we have many questions, for example, if watching TV a lot can make you more violent.

Personally, I can agree with this question. Since young people and childrens when their schedule ends,they can continue watching programs that are not appropiatet for them,but if the parents whose mother or father watch that, it would be much better.

On the other hand, I think that not all of the blame is on television, but easy use internet and the different violentsgames or that makes us extremely competitive can lead to violence for young people.

 All in all, I believe that much of the blame is of the new technologies, but really if they were not use technology, we would be less violent.

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