OPINION ESSAY - LAURA CASTRO


 
VIOLENCE IN OUR SOCIETY


Although the violence has always been in our society, maybe with the invention of the TV has increase.


Teenagers or young people like me are easy to influence about what we watch in the TV because sometimes we take actors and actresses like a model or idol to follow their actions, so if whose character in the film or series is a bad people, this can be a possible simple reason about the growth of the violence. But for example if I watch a film which violence is showed, I don’t become violent.


But its true that the parents should limit TV watching for their children to a few hours a week and only for children's and educational programs. Always keep them away from violent behaviors, especially in younger years.
To sum up I think that it depends of the character of the person the violence in the TV would have more or less influence in them.

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