opinion essay

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Opinion Essay—Violence in society
    

Now a days in the television they put programs which are not very educational and tend to teach to teenagers more violence than good things. However what we need to think about is if teenagers or adults become more violent after watching this kind of programes.

In my opinion I think that for sure they do make people more violent, because it teaches that hurting or misbehaving is fun, when at no point it is, it can even harm people who act violently to hurt people who they love. For example if you are used to watching these shows and you are used of getting angry you tend to get more angry and get more violent when you're in a bad mood, and these shows do not help you to be more relaxed.

But in the other point of view it can make people open their eyes and make them see that doing bad things is not fun, and they would not doit because they think that is not fun and that it can hurt people feelings. For example, if these programs help you open your eyes and realize that being violent is not good you will want to help people who tend to be violent, you will want to help them not to be violent.


All in all it depends of how that person who is seeing those kind of programes see the life, as I said before it can make them stop doing the violence or it can make them want to do more violence and hurt  ore people.I am of the opinion that is better not watching this programes and that is better to watch another type of TV shows.

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